Comments on: My Short Story For The Second Machine Of Death Collection https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/ We're back on a default theme because comments broke on my custom one and I don't have the energy to figure out why Fri, 11 Jun 2021 23:42:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.1 By: greedo https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-559447 Wed, 17 Sep 2014 17:34:15 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-559447 I have no problems. I just wanted to say that it’s an awesome game.

]]> By: Jordan Rusnack https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-551262 Sat, 09 Aug 2014 03:53:43 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-551262 Hello, My name is Jordan Rusnack and I just saw your early look at your new game HeatSig and wanted to ask if we could be added to your mailing list to get updates on your progress. My email is GameOutLoudPodcast@gmail.com.

I look forward to hearing from you

Cheers.

Jordan

]]> By: Q&A: Tom Francis, creator of Gunpoint, Heat Signature, The Grappling Hook Game! | Digital Combat Soldiers https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-510706 Mon, 07 Apr 2014 00:15:38 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-510706 […] a beautiful stealth puzzle game called Gunpoint. But there's more. He writes compelling short stories. He is on an amazing weekly gaming podcast. And he continues making games, including the new Heat […]

]]> By: athomas https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-441375 Sat, 17 Aug 2013 19:37:35 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-441375 Just writing to say, favorite story so far in the “this is how you die” collection. Great dialogue, witty, clever, funny. Props!

]]> By: Dylan https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-436256 Tue, 28 May 2013 20:15:56 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-436256 Wow, reading your stories have made me interested in the rest of the book(s). Really great work!

]]> By: Pentadact https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435600 Mon, 01 Apr 2013 19:30:40 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435600 Wow, that’s great to hear! Good luck!

]]> By: Paul https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435599 Mon, 01 Apr 2013 18:48:15 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435599 Over the last year, an thought has been forming inside my head: I think I want to try writing.

This was the last straw, it was just too inspiring. There’s nothing I can do. I’m gonna give it a go.

]]> By: Paul https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435598 Mon, 01 Apr 2013 18:41:52 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435598 Wow Tom! That was amazing! The last line made me laugh an oddly happy laugh. What a great story.

]]> By: Oji https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435595 Mon, 01 Apr 2013 08:57:19 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435595 this is brilliant…

]]> By: Jordan https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435569 Wed, 20 Mar 2013 21:51:42 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435569 Wow, what a story! Very entertaining!

]]> By: Pentadact https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435556 Tue, 12 Mar 2013 07:17:20 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435556 Haha, cheers everyone!

]]> By: Bret https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435555 Tue, 12 Mar 2013 03:03:29 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435555 Well, this kicks the pants off your story in the first collection, and that one was pretty good.

Funny, with a nice bit of actual tragedy mixed with the black humor. If the rest of the collection is this good, I’m buying extra copies.

]]> By: Jackrabbit https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435549 Sun, 10 Mar 2013 01:14:30 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435549 Tom, this is fantastic. Cannot wait for this book to come out so I can get a hard copy for my bookshelf.

]]> By: Kim Slawson https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435542 Fri, 08 Mar 2013 08:25:01 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435542 Very nicely written! As Merlin Mann might say, “NICE!”

]]> By: Lion https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435536 Wed, 06 Mar 2013 16:26:44 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435536 Throughout the whole thing I kept seeing Evil Genius. I’m not sure if this was intended.

Great story though!

]]> By: Rosti https://www.pentadact.com/2013-03-05-my-short-story-for-the-second-machine-of-death-collection/#comment-435529 Tue, 05 Mar 2013 23:40:21 +0000 http://www.pentadact.com/?p=5831#comment-435529 I’ve been unashamedly excited to see this story since you let us know it had been accepted into this collection months ago. Superb, Tom – you did not disappoint.

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