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The Shadow Line is finished now, and it was good until it got a bit wanky at the end. It’s nice to have something with a plot that genuinely requires some processing between episodes, and the cast has made me a fan of four of five actors I’d never seen before.
But a lot of characters felt the need to laboriously explain how the plot related to the broader themes the writer intended to touch on, some could not leave a room without valedicting six to ten separate times, and more than ever before, they would not stop trying to get the words ‘shadow’ and ‘line’ into the same sentence.
OK: “I might have a shadow on a line” is part of the plot, and if you tell me that’s the real cop lingo for an inside man on a drug deal, I can’t dispute it. But it’s so close to the title that no-one can hear it without a reflexive immersion break of, “Hey, that’s like the title of the show!” And it isn’t actually the title of the show.
I mean, it doesn’t explain it or give it any extra meaning. If a shadow is an inside man and a line is a drug deal or recurring drug deal, what’s a shadow line? A sentient drug deal that agrees to tell the police about itself?
So it gets painful when they mix four or five of these mentions with awkward references to “crossing the line”, “finding the line”, and subsequently attempting to “walk the line”, all while having to “live in the shadows”, “run to the shadows”, or “write significant-sounding dialogue for a show named The Shadow Line. From the shadows. Line.”
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Bret: Ever seen Justified?
Title drops fairly often there. But it's worth it, because Raylan Givens is great fun.
Timothy Olyphant, just being charming and shooting criminals.
Jason L: Werll, grammatically a shadow line could be a 'line' that's run by a 'shadow'.
I finally saw LA Confidential yesterday; that makes this the second time in 24 hours, and in 29 years, that I have seen a person use 'to valedict'.
Tony E: Damn it, Tom, you go too far. There's a line, and you've just crossed it. And now, standing on the other side of that line, you've got between it and the sun in some way.
Dan P: I'm bemused at the praise that Shadow Line has been getting. I couldn't even make it past the first episode as some of the writing drove me up the wall. Off the top of me head -
The 'tough' sergeant belabouring the "You're a word beginning with C" line past the point of incredulity.
The boss walking into the office where he works every day and saying "Oh, you can't smoke in here any more" and chewing a pencil. A pencil that gets close-up camera focuses. Several times.
The commander and Gabriel going to visit the dead-eyed parents and the commander offering him a lift. Because, you know, having driven there seperately I'm sure Gabriel just wanted to leave his own car there.
Personally I thought it felt horribly strained. Did it get better, or if I hated the first episode would I have hated the rest?
Jonn: You forgot to mention all the corresponding "light" references, starting with the first scene of the series. Also, it's fun to try and figure out which characters on each side of the line are mirrors or references to each other. Starting with Jay Wratten vs. Honey. Giggling, amoral near-sociopath vs. grumpy, upstanding cop. Bede Vs. Gabriel: Lawful Evil vs. Neutral Good.
It's not realistic, Dan P., but I found it interesting. I hear that a lot of people found it pretentious. Let's just say your mileage may vary.
roBurky: I didn't get through the first episode. I couldn't find anything to care about.
zee chen: Hated it. Totally hated it. Depressing, all the good people are murdered and it was horrible and dark.
I thought it would redeem itself but it never did. I do not want to live a world like this one.
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