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“Fuck!” This is the first few chunks of my short story for the Machine of Death challenge, which was great fun to write. I gave it a go because I thought it would be a good test of whether I can enjoy writing to someone else’s spec, and it turns out I much prefer it to writing my own ideas. There was something breezy about this whole process – it’s a short piece to begin with, but also not having the burden of responsibility for the concept makes it even easier to jump in.
More Machine of Death
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Thomas Lawrence: I read it. I liked it. Um... yes.
Zeno Cosini: It's GREAT. Did I detect the influence of Primer? The Schrodinger-server is brilliant.
Zeno Cosini: Er, so - you had to launch yourself out of the path of a Death Race-style driver, causing him to total his car? And you lost a single tooth when you hit the pavement?
Grill: Primer with bombs! Awesome. 9/10 (only 9/10 because I like longer paragraphs with more pretentious words and cos I've got used to giving everything 9/10 these days.)
Oh. Y'all already said that. SenatorPalpatine: I liked it.
Me: hi
SenatorPalpatine: Hmm, why didn't she get an abortion?
DiscountNinja: Noooooooo! Broken link :( I really wanted to read the rest of that :(
DiscountNinja: Mr Francis - you are my hero :D
Actually, just want to thank you for your work at PCG all these years too. I was delighted to find you had a blog :D Kazill: Wow, that was really good,
Waste_Manager: Very good, but I think the pace slows towards the end of the chapter a little too much. I have the full article pegged to read at home, and I'm looking forward to it.
Itrade: Cool story, I read it a while ago and re-read the ending just recently. What does the paper say if the person is going to die in their sleep of old age?
Craig Laycock: I really enjoyed that! Re: illustration I'm guessing a man looking pretty pissed off at a slip of paper would serve. Perhaps a speech bubble saying, "How do you even die from a sponge?"
Georgietowne Manburger: That was marvelous!
oscar: nice, should be in bed by now (exams tommorow) but i always have to read your stuff.
Jonn: I just thought of something; what if some guy fell asleep on his friend's couch or something, and his friend runs him through the machine, as a joke. When he wakes up, his friend half-jokes about telling him, whereupon our protagonist kills him to keep from knowing. As someone walks in on the grisly scene, he accidentally looks at the scrap of paper on which his fate is written; "ELECTROCUTION".
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